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Here's the rules:
- write a 100 word Halloween story appropriate for children
- use the words pumpkin, broomstick, and creak.
That's it! Try it. It's harder then you think. I wrote about 4 different stories before I finally got to this one. I like the slightly ambiguous nature of this story. Here it is:
Moonlit Night
by Sarah Maynard
Past the creepily bumpy pumpkins,
through the eerily creaky door,
down the bone-chillingly drafty hallway
sits a seemingly empty room.
near the surely haunted chair,
by the clearly dusty window,
waits a mysteriously glowing something.
chews the magically flying broomstick,
chases the curiously talking cat,
barks at a spookily quiet someone.
pets the mysteriously glowing something,
fixes the badly chewed broomstick,
attaches an awkwardly shaped sidecar.
jumps the mysteriously glowing something,
next to the spookily quiet someone,
flying toward the moon.
Exactly 100 words. Phew!
Check out all of the other amazing entries on Susanna's blog here. I just checked before I posted and there are almost 100 entries! Wow!
You have until 11:59 EST on October 31st to get your story out there. Get to spooking!
Happy Halloween!
Not knowing what you're facing is truly creepy, Sarah! Love this. :)
ReplyDeleteI LOVE the use of adverbs here!
ReplyDeleteSarah, This is a fun and creepy story. Love it!
ReplyDeleteHi Sarah! Very cool poem… love it.
ReplyDeleteOoh! Mysterious and fun, Sarah! I think the "mysteriously glowing something" might be a dog, but the "spookily quiet someone", though she is probably a witch, could be just about anything with magical powers :) Thanks so much for giving us the creeps and joining in the Halloweensie fun :)
ReplyDeleteCool chain rhyme, Sarah!
ReplyDeleteVery unique, Sarah. I love the feeling i get from reading hits - it lets my imagination run to the scariest corner. Cool. Look at mine - # 27 - Creak, C-R-E-A-K, Keep.
ReplyDeleteHow fun! You hooked me right at the beginning. Happy Halloweensie!
ReplyDeleteNice use of repetition. It flows well. Fun to read out loud.
ReplyDeleteAwesome! Loved the cumulative element!
ReplyDeleteIt sure would be fun to see what an illustrator would do with this. Way to go. :)
ReplyDeleteHooray for your inventive (and spooky) adverbs!
ReplyDeleteI love it, Sarah! Good luck!
ReplyDeleteFun and an adverb-palooza! Go Sarah Go! May I ride in the sidecar?
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